纵观全球经济的运行态势与未来方向，可持续发展已成为世界各国共同追求的奋斗目标，而中国在世界经济体系中扮演着关键角色，其经济规划是影响人类可持续发展的重要因素。作为现代经济的血脉，中国金融尤其是绿色金融必然在可持续发展进程中发挥独特作用，助力中国实现“碳达峰”与“碳中和”的减排目标。2022年2月，汇丰银行与21世纪资本研究院合作发布《中国绿色金融发展报告》，着眼于中国绿色金融的发展情况，从数据分析、政策解读与金融调研等维度考察中国绿色金融行业，为各方同行者提供参考。为向世界各国展现中国绿色金融的发展情况，翻译则成为必不可少的环节。

本翻译实践报告以笔者参与完成的《中国绿色金融发展报告》翻译任务为研究对象，结合变译理论的相关概念与分析框架，对此次翻译实践活动进行总结研究，探讨翻译问题的背后制因。首先，对比翻译原文、初稿与终稿，考察词汇、句法与语篇层面的问题，概括翻译过程中的难点。其次，归纳译文的各类问题并分类，总结翻译文本中出现的纰漏，并运用变译策略对译文进行修改。最后，从已有翻译问题中择选代表案例进行研究，阐明翻译纰漏的解决措施。

研究发现，变译理论对于翻译实践活动具有指导作用，能够在词汇、句法与语篇层面对文本进行提升，使其符合目标读者的阅读偏好。本实践报告归纳翻译实践过程中的主要问题与不足，以期为相关的翻译活动提供有益经验。

From the perspective of the development trend of the global economy, sustainable development has become the common goal of all countries in the world. China plays an important role in the world economic system and becomes a key factor in the sustainable development of mankind. At the same time, green finance is an important part of sustainable development and helps China to achieve the emission reduction targets of carbon peaking and carbon neutrality. In February 2022, HSBC cooperated with the 21st Century Capital Institute to release China’s Green Finance Development Report. It focuses on the development of China’s green finance, inspects China’s green industry, and provides a reference for peers. To show the development of China’s green finance to other countries in the world, translation has become the essential way.

This practice report takes the translation task of China’s Green Finance Development Report as the research object, summarizes the translation practice from the perspective of Translation Variation Theory, and discusses the causes of the translation problems. Firstly, the translator compared the source text, the draft version, and the final version, and then summarized the difficult points in the translation process. Secondly, all kinds of problems in the translation were summed up and the translator modified the translated text through translation variation devices. Finally, the representative cases were selected from the translation and studied, and the solutions to the translation problems were expounded.

It is found that the Translation Variation Theory can provide guidance to translation practice and help the translators to modify the text at lexical, syntactic, and textual levels. After the modification, the translated text can be more readable for the target readers. This practice report summarizes the problems in the translation process, sums up the findings and limitations of the research, and hopes to provide useful experience for relevant translation activities.

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